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Bazett Fraga McRemitz (Fate/) ([personal profile] answerer_sword) wrote in [community profile] mayfield_rpg 2012-01-21 06:26 am (UTC)

I first arrived here in November. From my conversations with Tohsaka, I knew she had been here longer than me, but I did not know how long.

[This is not right. Even if Tohsaka is a mage, even if her physical and mental abilities mean she can handle herself, she is still too young for what the town must have put her through. The Tohsaka in her homeworld was only sixteen, and this Tohsaka did not seem to be much older. A sixteen year old girl, trying to survive in a malicious town that sought to break its inhabitants psychologically if not physically. A sixteen year old girl, watching friends old and new being reduced to the hollow shells known as drones. It seems a wonder that Tohsaka is even functional at this point.]

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